Placement of a sound (tanka)
Placement of a sound Thunder left your lips In my deaflessness to hear a void developed What you said became one pulse, one beat, my heart passed over..."Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from...
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i wont pretend to understand Tankas & such forms (had all i could handle the kids Tonka toys) ... yet your intriguing word choices encouraged the placement my ear- the listening more than...
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The more I read this, the more I'm liking it. I might have to try out this form, as I have never attempted it before.
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Wow, two pieces from your pen have left me in awe this morning.....this is simply awesome....the last line....phenom....bravo....very much enjoyed....Poe
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This is a personal favorite of mine because I come back to it quite often and make changes. This one has been edited many times as I look to capture the right feeling and emotion of the jolt per say....
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Quote:What you said became one pulse, one beat, my heart passed over... This just speaks to my heart. I can totally identify with that feeling, when one word, one sentence, defines not just a moment...
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